New Business Announcement Letter Business Letter (Reshceudle The Inspection) ..Please Help Me Proofread...thanks?

Business Letter (Reshceudle the inspection) ..Please help me proofread...thanks? - new business announcement letter

I'm trying to write a letter to move the reference to the date of inspection of my property. Please help me correct and generate more business.


Some products (PO # 54789) may not be willing to agree with the review date of 29 November match, but the rest of them are yet to verify date of 29 November. We hope to schedule the inspections at two different times, it is 29 November, the other is the 1 December. I hope not too late to change. Please ask for details see attached.